portfolio re-design

waynede

New Member
Dear All,

I have just re-designed my portfolio design and would like feedback on the design along with thoughts as to how it can be made better or whether my current design is better:

Current site:
http://www.waynedeboer.co.uk/

homepage_redesign_180810.jpg



Thanks
 

waynede

New Member
No I host the site with heartinternet.

I'll be uploading another design possibly as working on adding something to the bottom to break up all the text.
 

v2Media

Member
A small criticism regarding a conflict of pronoun usage. Either present yourself as an individual or a plural entity - not both. If you are not a company, dont pretend to be one else it will cost you jobs. Potential customers that research for your company registration details will look else where when they find you are pretending to be a company.

I would steer clear of using "I", "Me", "Myself" and use second person "Wayne" or "DeBoer" instead. Pretend you are a subcontractor doing the site and get rid of the third plural/first person pronoun mix.
 
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