evolution8
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Tried to make my first website. Going for a clean look that matches our product. Any help or opinions would be much appreciated.
http://www.triadherbals.com
http://www.triadherbals.com
My first website... Please help
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The website is good for information. But i think the alignment needs work and the spacing between the edge and the text could be more. Also, if you are looking for a cleaner design and given that your product is herbal I'm not sure if black background is the color to go with.
Here are some websites that i thought were good:
http://www.bodycentreboutique.com/
http://www.bodycentrewellnessspa.com/
Hope this helps
Here are some websites that i thought were good:
http://www.bodycentreboutique.com/
http://www.bodycentrewellnessspa.com/
Hope this helps
Don't have a background. Just use white and concentrate on the information. Content over style. See http://www.eatleigh.com
Vivid
New Member
I disagree with that completely. Your going in the right direction with your site. The main text is to bold and the white text on the light green to the right may be a little to hard to read for some users.
Jeez, that's one fugly site
I definitely agree about the white background though. That alone will make the site much easier on the eyes. I would also like to see the animated .gif disappear, 'cause at 24 frames it just looks like it's skipping out of tune.
Snerdey
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I think the whole top area is too big to be taken seriously. Most successful sites do not use a massive logo, the fonts are bold and don't look right to me.
The company name, tins are way too many and too big. Testimonials does not need that tin above them and you really need to change that text to black as white text just is not recommended.
The guide is just too hard to read.. keep the top that's fine but change the bottom to white background - black text.
Keep in mind.. it's not what you like that really counts.. it's what works that counts
The company name, tins are way too many and too big. Testimonials does not need that tin above them and you really need to change that text to black as white text just is not recommended.
The guide is just too hard to read.. keep the top that's fine but change the bottom to white background - black text.
Keep in mind.. it's not what you like that really counts.. it's what works that counts
Too many graphics and too large graphic files. The website is slooooow loading and there are way too many herbal sites out there for anyone to spend that much time waiting on yours to load.
Bold text everywhere. Why?
The text is crowded up against the edge. You need to add some padding.
The heading is too large. It takes up a third of my screen.
I don't particular care for the black background. In fact, the whole site is a little dark for me. I would think a softer approach would be better for selling herbal stuff.
Bold text everywhere. Why?
The text is crowded up against the edge. You need to add some padding.
The heading is too large. It takes up a third of my screen.
I don't particular care for the black background. In fact, the whole site is a little dark for me. I would think a softer approach would be better for selling herbal stuff.
BrainchildGroup
New Member
Looking good, especially for your first website! Keep practicing and you will improve drastically.
-Aaron
-Aaron
tatsudoshi65
New Member
I'm not digging the black background, doesn't suit your product. And the over-all color choices are too dark and harsh; get rid of the gray. If you're going for a clean look try white. It just opens the site up and helps your eye to focus on the content where as black makes you feel like the page is closing in... idk if that makes sense. lol Also, the text shouldn't be bold. I don't like the mixture of different fonts either.
But for your first site, GOOD JOB!
But for your first site, GOOD JOB!
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