What do your think about the following LandingPage?

chrishirst

Well-Known Member
Staff member
If you intend us to actually 'review' the 'experience of the 'page';

1: Get rid of the ridiculous "pop-up"/overlay because it 'breaks' the WHOLE PURPOSE of a 'landing page' and prevents anyone from giving a true impression of a 'landing page'


2: That is NOT a 'landing page' (in the marketing use of the phrase). While it is a page that a visitor might 'land on'. It is however worded as if it were the 'about us' document on a website.

as a design: 8 out of 10

as a marketing page, 0 out of 10.
 

Kit_Pantelope

New Member
Hi my name is Kit. First time posting here. Chrishirst - agree with his comments. Would only give it a 6 out of 10 though for design. and a 2 out of 10 for marketing. At least both of our numbers add up to 8...right?
  • Not a fan of big headers full of whitespace - it doesn't really provide any value to the user and it's not beautiful.
  • It seems as if your English is off in a lot of places.
  • You do 3-d visualizations, but the rest of your landing page is about Marketing...in Boston?
  • Also the clients you have logos of, the quotes aren't from them - there's not connection and it's a design disconnect
  • The map provides no additional value, not even as a contact.
I would recommend going back to basic marketing - who is your target market, what do they want, where is you traffic coming from, what is their buying state, etc, and address those things with a cohesive message and design.
 
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