txincorporated
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Please go and visit my website and leave me your suggestions and critics.it is at www.txincorporated.biz .Hope to hear from you soon.
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kiko_friendly
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I agree with Ian, there.
I think that you should improve the image quality of the banners, certainly the top banner.
I think that you should improve the image quality of the banners, certainly the top banner.
Controlling.de
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There are too many Ads on the page and the header seems to be a bit incomplete. But well done.
DLPerry
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Just my .02 mind you.
To me the whole thing feels disjointed.
From a Visual perspective:
The sitewide banner and navigation images look un-coordinated. They appear to be of the same general style (looks like old FP template graphics in fact) - but there is no color consistency and they have a 'copy-n-pasted' look. This also extends to other images used on the site - some of which also appear to be a bit too low res and/or not optimized for use on the site..
On at least one page - the navigation menu is not consistent with the rest of the site.
As already mentioned - the stacked Google ad blocks are a big put-off. And the widely varying layout and page sizes give an unprofessional feel.
From a Content perspective:
From the home page, I can't really tell what the site offers. The banner says website design and development, and makes me think this is a website design firm. But the content seems to be more about learning computer tricks, promoting some Tutorials, and something about Google Adsense tricks.
Once I navigate to the Services page I see this is discussing a tutorial package. I assume this is the purpose of the site.
The grammar, flow and readability of the content needs work. Some paragraphs appear to be there for the purpose of filling space rather than imparting any real information, and some sentences appear to be incomplete and do not make sense.
Again - just my .02.
To me the whole thing feels disjointed.
From a Visual perspective:
The sitewide banner and navigation images look un-coordinated. They appear to be of the same general style (looks like old FP template graphics in fact) - but there is no color consistency and they have a 'copy-n-pasted' look. This also extends to other images used on the site - some of which also appear to be a bit too low res and/or not optimized for use on the site..
On at least one page - the navigation menu is not consistent with the rest of the site.
As already mentioned - the stacked Google ad blocks are a big put-off. And the widely varying layout and page sizes give an unprofessional feel.
From a Content perspective:
From the home page, I can't really tell what the site offers. The banner says website design and development, and makes me think this is a website design firm. But the content seems to be more about learning computer tricks, promoting some Tutorials, and something about Google Adsense tricks.
Once I navigate to the Services page I see this is discussing a tutorial package. I assume this is the purpose of the site.
The grammar, flow and readability of the content needs work. Some paragraphs appear to be there for the purpose of filling space rather than imparting any real information, and some sentences appear to be incomplete and do not make sense.
Again - just my .02.