My website try out

[tomdw]

Hi guys,

Just finished my webdesign classes a month ago and this is my first try: http://www.webdeluxe.com.br/

I need to learn more actionscript to make it look a little more pro (like a goodlooking preloader, etc.)

What do you guys think

Greetings from Brazil.
Tom

 

[Geodun1]

I'm not a fan of all flash sites, but you did a good job here. It seems kind of monotone, but the yellow/orange colors help with that. In some places where you use white text, it can be difficult to read. Another thing to point out, is it might help to make the central color on your gradient (white) a LIGHT LIGHT gray(CCCCCC, AAAAAA?). This would make the fade smoother and would help blend the gradient into the site.

 

[tomdw]

He Geodun1,

Thanks, true there's some action missing... that's why i have to learn more actionscript. Maybay i have to put some sort of light animation background in the menu section?

The white is coming out fine on my computer but on the one of my grandfather it is indeed difficult to read, maybay if i change the background or give it another color, this will help.

 

[Gorgy]

I liked the design you've created but I'd like to ask something:
is it correct that you have Muziek Consultant instead of Music Consultant in your English version?
And I don't really understand the idea of the three round logos. They aren't linked to certain pages. So I feel confused about them

 

[tomdw]

The music - muziek button is a mistake indeed, i saw it too...
The 3 logo's, true, perhaps i have to link them to the webpages, otherwise there a little bit lost.
thanks for the remarks!

 

[pingeyeg]

Not bad. You need to have some more movement in the start up though. Since you are making it entirely out of flash I would like to see more going on with some more speed.